Sunday, October 11, 2009

The take on useing nothing like "i", "me" and things like that invites people to read. Being personal about someplace can make somebody dismiss that place they could have enjoyed.

a judging tone is not good, don't use "best" because that is in the eye of the beholder. Words such as "should" are not grounded and make somebody uneasy.

Bold the mission of your statement if you want focus to be brought to it. this is a way without saying i that a person can express a point at arms reach.

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